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Seedy Business Very creative storytelling and characterization In terms of the I liked it aspect of romance ratings, I d probably give itof a 3 3.5 because I did like the romance just did not really like or love it The unique world, the strong characters, and the inner torment of the not so nice guy and not so gay or so he thinks narrator that the author fit into a 40 page story, though, are mighty impressive This story is available for FREE as part of the M M Romance group s Don t Read Very creative storytelling and characterization In terms of the I liked it aspect of romance ratings, I d probably give itof a 3 3.5 because I did like the romance just did not really like or love it The unique world, the strong characters, and the inner torment of the not so nice guy and not so gay or so he thinks narrator that the author fit into a 40 page story, though, are mighty impressive This story is available for FREE as part of the M M Romance group s Don t Read in the Closet GayRomLit Retreat 2011 anthology Download it here I wanted to be squicked out by the over load of details that you don t often get in m m fiction, but it was just too amazing I loved every moment of it I can honestly say that this is one of the most unique stories that I have read and it was so well rounded that it felt like a definite possibility that this is what the future could be like The characters were just as unusual and disturbed as their environment, and the story altogether was something I d love to readof. Funny, weird, whacko I was laughing out loud several times This has explicit erotic gay male sex.A sperm pirate kidnapped or somehow obtained donors victims They are strapped down with machines feeding them drugs and milking them every two hours Beirn is sneaking up on the place, planning to free his brother Ox I ve never read anything like this I loved the set up and the author s creative and funny body part terms.The negatives The relationship between the two guys was too vague I want Funny, weird, whacko I was laughing out loud several times This has explicit erotic gay male sex.A sperm pirate kidnapped or somehow obtained donors victims They are strapped down with machines feeding them drugs and milking them every two hours Beirn is sneaking up on the place, planning to free his brother Ox I ve never read anything like this I loved the set up and the author s creative and funny body part terms.The negatives The relationship between the two guys was too vague I wantedclarity It was unfinished.This is a short story, a free download from Goodreads It gives a little back story for the sequel Grown Men The characters in this story are Beirn and Zed Their story does not continue in the sequel The characters in the sequel are Ox and Runt DATA Narrative mode 3rd person Kindle count story length 688 Swearing language strong Sexual language strong Number of sex scenes two orhard to count since much of the story is about sperm collection Setting unknown time on another planet Copyright 2011 Genre erotic sci fi gay male fiction I really enjoyed this one Definitely one of my fave stories posted so far Fantastic world building, terrific characters, and I absolutely loved the humour, writing style, and dialogue especially Beirn s internal thoughts It was such a page turner, and I was so sad to see it end.Can we get a sequel Please, please D I would love a continuation of their story adventures, and my inner kink is dying to know what else these two could get up to between the sheets Oh, the possibilities Ha I really enjoyed this one Definitely one of my fave stories posted so far Fantastic world building, terrific characters, and I absolutely loved the humour, writing style, and dialogue especially Beirn s internal thoughts It was such a page turner, and I was so sad to see it end.Can we get a sequel Please, please D I would love a continuation of their story adventures, and my inner kink is dying to know what else these two could get up to between the sheets Oh, the possibilities Haha P I d also love to see some from Zed s PoV as well Story PromptMy momma always told me anything was possiblebut I m not too sure she d considered these boys Will you prove my momma right Umeewwwwwwww This was uniqueand gross Although I am interested in reading the sequel Excellent world building, characters you start out hating and end up loving, laugh out loud phrases and comments on every single page All in a short story Seedy Business achieves what the majority of full length novels only aspire to I understand there s another related story and cannot wait to read it. This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers To view it, click here 4.5 stars.Good Lord Damon I m kind of speechless I knew this was going to kind of out there, but Before tonight, Beirn had never stolen a set of designer testicles.Now with a start like this, I realized that I d better be ready for anything Beirn Zed are fairly despicable characters yet somehow, by the end, I was feeling sorry for them and hoped they would work things out together Just how did you do that I mean, to sell Ox s balls, trap him with Zed, yet feel sorry for him Damn Then 4.5 stars.Good Lord Damon I m kind of speechless I knew this was going to kind of out there, but Before tonight, Beirn had never stolen a set of designer testicles.Now with a start like this, I realized that I d better be ready for anything Beirn Zed are fairly despicable characters yet somehow, by the end, I was feeling sorry for them and hoped they would work things out together Just how did you do that I mean, to sell Ox s balls, trap him with Zed, yet feel sorry for him Damn Then you had me cracking up at some the images you painted This is my punishment a dwarf in heat chucking his muck on me.So while I have yet to decide if I actually liked this story or not, I certainly can say it was one heck of a story Well, after reading it a second time I decided that I do like it, but it gave me a hell of a shock initially PS I love the cover you created for this Damon it s perfect 3.5 starsI thought this was really good until the very end the last page or two , at which point I found one of the characters attitude shift jarring in its abruptness But I rounded up because this little story is free and certainly worth reading It also gives some interesting and useful backstory for Grown Men, a novella which I found excellent and certainly superior to this story It also has some elements from this story that make this story feel like a rough draft for that novella The w 3.5 starsI thought this was really good until the very end the last page or two , at which point I found one of the characters attitude shift jarring in its abruptness But I rounded up because this little story is free and certainly worth reading It also gives some interesting and useful backstory for Grown Men, a novella which I found excellent and certainly superior to this story It also has some elements from this story that make this story feel like a rough draft for that novella The world building here is impressive for the length, and Mr Suede is a solid writer with a mature voice and solid command of the written word His prose flows and there s none of the stilted, awkward feeling common in m m writing.A solid introduction to Mr Suede s writing and to the HardCell series, but inferior to his longer writing 1.5 stars, rounded upMe after reading the first three paragraphs In fact, that was my reaction throughout the short story.The main characters aren t particularly likeable, the romance isn t really a romance, and the sheer what the fuckery made me question my reading choices.And yet, if you just sit back and let it happen, it s not that bad It s written well too I don t think I ve ever been as fascinated yet simultaneously grossed out by the world building as I was reading Seedy Business.If y 1.5 stars, rounded upMe after reading the first three paragraphs In fact, that was my reaction throughout the short story.The main characters aren t particularly likeable, the romance isn t really a romance, and the sheer what the fuckery made me question my reading choices.And yet, if you just sit back and let it happen, it s not that bad It s written well too I don t think I ve ever been as fascinated yet simultaneously grossed out by the world building as I was reading Seedy Business.If you re looking for something different, give this a try Official Description Revenge can get stickyThis prequel to Grown Men is a crazy sci fi short about sperm piracy and sibling rivalry gone seriously wrongWhen corporate mercenary Beirn agrees to a sleazy organ harvest job, he walks straight into his worst nightmare, a trap set by the twin brother he betrayed Against his better judgment, Beirn teams up with a semen smuggler to save his own skin and hopefully make amends to the only family he has leftLoathing turns to lust as the two men grapple with their violent impulses and their growing desire In one terrible night, impossible feelings will force Beirn to understand the brother he betrayed and the mistakes he s made Warning doublecrosses, dirty sex, and designer testicles These stories can be read in any orderOriginal Prompt Dear Author,My momma always told me anything was possiblebut I m not too sure she d considered these boys Will you prove my momma right Photo Description Two smiling, uncut men stand naked next to each other beside a grey tree on a tropical beach One is hyper masculine, all over bigger and hairier than the other His right arm drapes over the right shoulder of the shorter man, who barely reaches his shoulder in heightThis story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Hot Summer Days event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short storyDownload the story, read it here or find it in Don t Read in the Closet, Volumeor Don t Read in the Closet GayRomLit RetreatSpecial EditionGenre sci fiTags gay m m, sperm piracy, giant, mercenary, criminals, hormones, twins, doublecross, sounding, science fictionWord Count ,


About the Author: Damon Suede

Damon Suede grew up out n proud deep in the anus of right wing America, and escaped as soon as it was legal He has lived all over and along the way, he s earned his crust as a model, a messenger, a promoter, a programmer, a sculptor, a singer, a stripper, a bookkeeper, a bartender, a techie, a teacher, a director but writing has ever been his bread and butter He has been happily partnered for over a decade with the most loving, handsome, shrewd, hilarious, noble man to walk this planet.Though new to gay romance, Damon is an award winning author who has been writing for print, stage, and screen for two decades, which is bothand less glamorous than you might imagine He s won some awards, but he counts his blessingsoften his amazing friends, his demented family, his beautiful husband, his loyal fans, and his silly, stern, seductive Muse who keeps whispering in his ear, year after year.Damon would love to hear from you you can get in touch with him here Email DamonSuede.com Facebook Twitter Dreamspinner PressThe Romance Reviews


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